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help with grammar, spelling... needed

Jan. 23rd, 2010 | 04:34 pm
posted by: hana_no_shi in thebetahole

Hello, I am a German student. I have to write paper on criminal profiling, more specifically a comparison of criminal profiling in the US and Europe, for school. Everyone has to write such an essay and it will count into my A-levels (the German highschool diploma). Now I have to admit we were given a lot of time, but I (of course) just started working on it a few days before. I have to turn it in in about 10 days. Now I am kind of frantically searching for a beta reader as I don't know anyone from America who lives in Germany or the US as I haven't been able to participate in an exchange year as some of my classmates did.
I would really, really appreciate it if someone could give my work a quick overlook. I don't ask for anyone to correct content-related matters but just give it a quick once-over, keeping their eyes open for misused words or grammar/spelling mistakes. I would be very grateful, if someone was willing to do that.
Thanks in advance,
hana

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Bones Fic Needed Betaing...

Aug. 2nd, 2009 | 01:52 pm
mood: artistic
posted by: willowsnuggles in thebetahole

Hi,

I have written a 1200 word Bones fic, on the topic of Booth and Bones together, its from Booth looking back, I'd like someone to read it over, make sure if flows...check my terrible spelling grammer. Give me some good feed back, I like to make it presentable to post.

Thanks
Willowsnuggles

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Beta for Vampire Knight and Yami no Matsuei (yaoi)

Jul. 29th, 2009 | 04:37 pm
music: foo fighters
posted by: hanamaruu in thebetahole


I may start writing other fandoms but currently Im hooked on VK.  I went thru a YnM phase too.  Oh yea, its all yaoi.  You can look at my work on ff.net at  http://www.fanfiction.net/~hanamaru.  My early stories totally suck but I think Ive improved.  I like to have my stuff beta'd within 2 or 3 weeks.   If that sounds good to you, pls read my fics first, then let me know if you wanna be mine.


Hana 

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Looking for a temporary beta for some RPF American Idol Slash.

Jul. 8th, 2009 | 01:13 am
posted by: dream_a_dreamer in thebetahole

 Right now I'm in the beginning stages of writing this piece. By that I mean I have done the introduction and the first chapter that needs to be beta read. I will only need a temporary beta because for some strange reason I have lost all contact with my former beta. I have become inpatient in waiting for a reply back from them. So as you see need a temporary beta to fill her shoes for now. A little bit about my story that I have written. Yes it's slash. Kradam to exact thats Kris Allen and Adam Lambert together. It's around a main idea that Love doesn't come from rain. Here is a link to my journal with the story    http://dream-a-dreamer.livejournal.com/  It's called Rain and if you would like to be my beta I would be very grateful.

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Looking for a Beta for NCIS Fanfiction

Jul. 3rd, 2009 | 06:50 pm
mood: okayokay
music: Blue - The Birthday Massacre
posted by: kidondarkangel in thebetahole

Most of my stories will revolve around Ziva, Ari, and Kate, with the main pairing being Kate/Ari. So liking or at least putting up with those characters and that pairing is certainly a plus. I'll usually have more than one story in progress at time which can be confusing. Most of my stuff tends to be darker with bits of humor thrown in. A strong stomach is useful as well since my stuff can get graphic. My main weaknesses are spelling, punctuation, and keeping in character. I tend to have inconsistencies in the pace I write, sometimes I'll write nonstop, but sometimes I  won't write a word. A strict beta is wanted, someone who won't sugarcoat their feedback, and can keep me in line. I promise not to argue or whine at any harshness. I know that's a lot of requirements and I'll be the first to admit that I'm not the easiest person to get along with. But I promise I'll do my best to be a good student if you're willing to put up with me.
If you're actually interested after all that please send a message my way. Thanks.

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Jul. 2nd, 2009 | 10:19 pm
posted by: likethepaint in thebetahole

Hi, I'm looking for someone willing to beta a work in progress story. It's original fiction, kinda a romance that's not really all that romantic for the most part. Think romance but with two smelly boys in the back of a van, except I haven't even got to that point yet because I've hit a wall completely. I'd love it if someone could look over what I've got (14,500 words - about 1/4 of the story, I suspect.) and then potentially help talk through some ideas of how to get past the problem I've got.

I know exactly where I've gone wrong, and I have some ideas about how I could fix it, but I'd love some input.

Anyone interested can email me likethepaint [at] gmail [dot] com. Ideally I'd love someone to work on a long term basis (although obviously I don't need constant handholding) for the entire story, but I'm happy if you only want to do this one little bit. I can generally take constructive critism, (though I can't promise I won't pout a little bit XD), I'd rather someone was tough but honest when I suck than lied for the sake of my feelings.

Thanks! :)

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RPF Beta Needed

Jun. 19th, 2009 | 11:08 am
posted by: jrpopfan in thebetahole

So, I am looking for a Beta reader who is willing to beta Disney RPF. Most of my stories are about the real cast members of the Disney Channel. I have one of Emily Osment and now working on Jennifer Stone. But I am really in need for a beta. All stories contain a OC as the main character along with a cast member. They are adult themed too. 

Anyone interested can message me. Thanks!

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Looking for a beta for fanfictio...and possibably original fiction

Jun. 11th, 2009 | 10:27 am
posted by: jen176 in thebetahole

Hi, I'm looking for a beta for a Marvel comics fanfic series that I am currently writing, that is set in the universe of the Next Avengers Direct-to-DVD, but expands on the universe and concept, focuses on original characters and canon characters, and makes references to material in mainstream continuity.

I may also need someone to beta for an original fiction that I am also working, which is a police drama in the SF/Fantasy genre.

If anyone is interested, contact me.

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looking for a constant beta :D

Jun. 10th, 2009 | 11:20 am
mood: hopefulhopeful
posted by: grayx3eyedsoul in thebetahole


Heya!

I write mostly in three fandoms, Harry Potter, Percy Jackson and the Olympians and Twilight.
Mostly oneshot-ers or a drabble fic.

I know it's rare that one person reads all three of these fandoms and is a control freak, so if you read any of these fandoms, please reply here. Comment here and I will get an email :D

Oh! I mostly post on LJ and FF.net

I'm 15, I won't be writing explict scenes, or anything of the like. Again what i've written above is mostly my genre and length.

If you'd like to check some of my work I've already done, click the links above :D

Please, if you have a moment and read even one of these fandoms, take a sec to post.

:D

grayx3eyedsoul

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elaran: [untitled ficlet], SG-1, gen, G

Jan. 23rd, 2008 | 09:43 pm
posted by: elaran in thebetahole

Hi, I'm more of a fic reader and a lurker rather than a writer but I signed up for 12in2008 and hence need someone to beta my ficlets. This is the first one I've written. Any concrit is appreciated and yeah, be blunt/harsh if that's how you crit, I don't mind.

Title: [Untitled as of yet]
Rating: G
Fandom: Stargate SG-1
Characters: Sam Carter
Disclaimer: They're not mine, I just like to play in the 'verse.
Author Notes: 'History' prompt for samcarter_gen. I'm uncertain if my tenses are correct. And as always, punctuation, grammar and spelling please.
Summary: Sam and Mark bonding. She finds some things from her past.

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